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This is a story from the reality of the "Tales of
the Twilight Menshevik". Rogue made it up a few years
in the future as a bedtime story for her young sisters Irene
and Hope, the daughters of Val Cooper and Raven Darkhölme
You can find the other Tales archived on "Fonts
of Wisdom," on "Down-Home
Charm," on "Queen
of Hearts" and on "X-Men
Note: This was written in answer to Kielle's challenge
to write a story in the style of Kipling's classic Just
By Tilman Stieve, aka the Menshevik
(With apologies to Rudyard Kipling.)
In the far-off early days, far away from here, there lived
a neolithic couple, and they lived in a Hut. It wasn't a hogan,
Best Beloved, or a kiva or a cliff-dwelling or anything fancy
like that, just a rude cabin made of earth and wood. One of
them was called Mystallumai Ravendrow, and that means 'Blue-warrior-who-cannot-keep-out-of-trouble',
but we, oh Best Beloved, shall call her Mysti for short. And
her mate's name was Valeranamai Coopimai, and that means 'Yellow-hair-who-won't-take-no-for-an-answer',
but we shall call her Vally. They had two little girl-daughters,
Best Beloved, whose names were Iriniai Coopallumai -- 'Little-blue-person-with-the-manners-of-a-sparrow'
-- and Hopsulai Annulai -- 'Girl-who-giggles-at-inappropriate-moments'
-- but I shall call 'em Iree and Hopey. And they were Mysti's
Best Beloved and Vally's Best Beloved, and their parents overlooked
more than was good for them; and they were all four very happy.
Mysti and Vally often went out for adventures, but they always
made sure that they were back in time for dinner, and in the
meantime Mysti's son Kurtumai -- 'Fuzzy-skin-whose-belly-makes-a-nice-pillow'
-- or her eldest daughter Rogulai -- 'Hair-like-a-skunk-and-slightly-better-smell'
-- would come to the Hut to look after Iree and Hopey.
Now listen and hear and attend!
One day, when Mysti and Vally were out adventuring longer
than usual, Iree and Hopey went with their Sister Rogulai
to the river Potomahac (all set about with maple trees) to
go fish some dinner. Only Rogulai had taken her good friend
Magunai with her, and after a while they sat apart looking
into each other's eyes and doing other grownup stuff, while
Iree and Hopey sat on the river-bank (of course they had brought
little stools, rudely made from wood and grass) waiting for
the fish to bite. It wasn't a good day for fishing, and after
a while they were beginning to feel bored and started to dangle
their feet in the water (yes, they had their Mommies' leave).
Just then a Stranger-Man came walking along the bank of the
river, and he stood there, watching them. He belonged to another
tribe, the Tewaras, and he had never seen a girl with pretty
sky-blue skin as Iree's or with pretty sky-blue hair as Hopey's.
He smiled at them because he had a girl-daughter of his own
at his home, and so he sat down with them and chatted with
them for a time. But because talking with Iree and Hopey got
him thinking of his own far-away family, he soon left to go
to his own home.
Now, no sooner had the Stranger-Man (did I mention he was
a Tewara?) left them, when another man appeared, Loganai Anonymai,
whose name means 'Hairy-man-with-a-breath-that-causes-birds-to-drop-from-the-sky'.
He belonged to the same tribe as the family of Mysti, the
Children of the Acorn, and he was angry at Iree and Hopey
for talking to the Stranger-Man. "Didn't your folks tell
ya not t'talk with Tewara Stranger-Men?" he said. "The
Tewaras make this a world that hates and fears the Children
of the Acorn, ain't yer parents ever told you? If I were your
daddy, I'd spank you!"
But the girls were not scared, and Iree humphed and said:
"But you're not our daddy, an' we're not scared of Stranger-Men,
an' 'sides you smell."
And Hopey giggled and squealed: "Yes, funny man smells
like potty used as an ashtray!" This was not exactly
true, but near enough, for Loganai was returning from one
of his adventures and had been marching across country for
several days without ever taking a bath.
Then Loganai became very angry, because if there was one
thing he hated it was people laughing at him. He said: "Why
I oughta...!" and reached out for the girls as if he
was going to spank them. At that moment their Big Sister appeared
and hurled him into the river (while she had done that mushy
stuff with her boyfriend, she had always kept an eye on her
"You lay a hand on the kids, hairy, an' ah'll bop ya
again!" she shouted.
The man clambered out of the river a couple of hundred yards
downstream, and grinned. "Well, at least the little brat
should like my smell better now that ya've given me a bath,"
he said, and set off into the woods.
And Hopey grinned and said: "You made goo-goo eyes at
Maggie alla time 'stead of playing with us, didn't notice
funny man was only joking!" And you know what, Best Beloved?
Rogulai's face went all pink.
"He din't really want to spank us," said Iree,
"I think he was just play-actin'."
And Rogulai wondered if she hadn't been a little hasty.
Loganai went to his tribal village, and told his neolithic
friends what had happened. Unfortunately, one of those listening
and he went to the bald Head-Chief of the tribe of
the Children of the Acorn and told him that Mysti and Vally
had raised their three daughters most shockingly, and shouldn't
something be done about it? And the Head-Chief called his
Vice-Chief and his Deputy and Assistant Chiefs, and they held
a pow-wow and a palaver and a storthing and an indaba and
a conventicle to decide what was to be done.
Meanwhile, the three sisters had finally caught some fish,
and went home to the Hut. And when they got there, they saw
that their mommies had returned from their adventures. And
they all were glad and started making dinner. And Rogulai's
face went all pink again when Iree and Hopey told their mommies
what had happened on the river-bank.
But when they were sitting down at their rude neolithic table,
Mysti pricked up her ears. "There's people coming,"
They opened the door, and they saw the whole entire tribe
of the Children of the Acorn approaching. First came the bald
Head Chief, wheeled along in a rude neolithic wooden chair,
then came the white-haired Vice-Chief, the red-eyed Deputy
Chief and the Assistant Chiefs (all armed to the back teeth),
tha Atamans and Avatars, the Maharajahs with their Morlocks
and Counts with their caucuses; with Juju-Men, Augurs, Shamans,
Bonzes and Tea-Leaf-Readers bringing up the rear (still armed
to the teeth), followed by the entire Tribe of the Children
of the Acorn in alphabetical order, from Aardvark-Man the
Astounding to Zyppedeedooda (with a 'y') the Zany.
Vally said: "Welcome, tribe of the Children of the Acorn,
we are just serving dinner. I'm not sure if there's enough
fish for everyone, though."
And Mysti said: "You look agitated, Head-Chief, is anything
And the bald Head Chief replied: "I have been told that
you, Blue-warrior-who-cannot-keep-out-of-trouble, and you,
Yellow-hair-who-won't-take-no-for-an-answer, have not told
your children that they shouldn't talk to Tewara Stranger-Men.
Why have you not taught them that it is the way of the Children
of the Acorn to keep apart and to hide what they are from
a world that hates and fear them?"
And Rogulai said under her breath: "Great, just what
we need, an excuse for Iree to cover herself in mud..."
All the Chiefs, Juju-Men, Augurs, Shamans, Bonzes and Tea-Leaf-Readers
looked down sternly at Iree and Hopey so intensely, that they
began to feel a little incomfortable, but Iree felt her Mommy
Vally's hands on her shoulders, and Mommy Mysti lifted Hopey
up into her arms, and so they both felt safe.
Iree walked up to the Head Chief: "But you keep tellin'
us of your dream of a world where the Children of the Acorn
can live in peace with the Tewaras, so why are you tellin'
us off when we do just that? An' 'sides, Mommy Vally is a
Tewara, and she gets along just fine with Mommy Misty. Well,
And Hopey chirped up and said: "Yes, sometimes they
shout at each other alla day, but in the evening they make
kissy-face again." And Vally's face turned all pink,
and Mysti's all purple, because grownups get all embarrassed
when that sort of thing is discussed outside the family.
But the Head Chief said to Iree: "Well, Little-blue-person-with-the-manners-of-a-sparrow,
if you put it that way, there is something to it. And Loganai
tells me that your Big Sister was watching over you, so I
think you weren't in any danger. And now I and the other Chiefs
will have to think about what you just said."
And with that, the whole tribe turned around and went back
to its village. A few of the Children of the Acorn were grumbling,
and a lot of them were ever so polite to Teller-of-tales and
called him a fathead who had wasted their time. But Mysti
and Vally took their daughters back inside their rude neolithic
hut and they all finally had dinner without being interrupted
But ever since that day, there were more and more Children
of the Acorn who would actually live the Head Chief's dream
and not just talk about it.
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